Monday, March 19, 2012

Writing rubric

5 Paragraph Paper
Thesis Paragraph (1) - The axolotl is an amazing creature.
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Conclusion - be unique

Axolotl writing

        Axolotls are amazing creature salamanders that live in water that live in only one lake. What are these strange four legged salamander creature? How do they live in the water? How can they live in only one lake?

       Here is there story, it was said that hundreds of years ago when the ice age was happening a lake stayed frozen and in that lake were baby salamander eggs but since the lake was frozen solid how would they get out, they couldn't. The baby salamanders evolved into some type of fish lizard thing, there slick as wet glass and dark as night. What are these weird looking lizard fish?

         When the scientist found them they didn't know, they studied them watched them. They decided to call them Axolotls. They watched how they survived how they ate and found that if they are dark and black that they would use there skin to blend into the rocks of the lake to hide from prey yet some weren't so lucky to get features that were dark some are albinos. These albino axolotls were caught so they couldn't die off, so now a days if you see an axolotl in the wild you know that number one its not going to last long and number two that is a rare seeing. Even the wild type are coming to extinction.

          So now you know why I call them amazing creature and how they are very close to extinction and how its very hard to find them in the wild or even in captivity, but my teacher was lucky to have two of these amazing creatures. We take care of them and feed them crickets, they are always well feed and cared for. I've touched them before they are very very fast and slimy. You can tell that they don't want to be touched.

        We keep our axolotls in a big fish tank but you cant put just any water in the tank you have to take tap water and let it sit for 24 hours and let all the chemicals evaporate out. You can put a filter in the water but you don't really need to. We feed our axolotls meal worms and crickets. That is the best way to take care of an axolotls.

           5 Fun Facts about Axolotls:
  • Axolotls lay jelly like eggs.
  • They eat with suction.
  • They became neotinic and it actually helped them.
  • They regenerate limbs, heart tissue, brain tissue and spinal tissue.
  • They become stressed in moving water (or warm).


Thursday, March 1, 2012

Whats your hobby?


      Everyone has hobbies. Some of my hobbies are taking care of animals, playing sports and using fun technology. All of these are really great activities for me.

      My favorite animal is a dog.  The reason why is because they are lovable cute and furry little animals. I have three dogs. My oldest is 11 years old, my 2nd oldest is 8 years old and my dog is 1 1/2 years old. I love to take care of my dogs and play with them. I take them to my local park every day and I also take care of other dogs.

     My two favorite sports are soccer and running. I try to do it every day. The reason why I call it my hobby is because I try to do this every day and I learn something new from it. My dad also coaches me on what I'm doing and corrects my mistakes. One time I was playing soccer with my dad and I beat him. It was really fun.

      The reason why I put technology as one of my many hobby's is because I love to play with computers, phones and iPads. I have an iPad and a computer. I love to figure new things about them. It is really fascinating to learn about new things such as how it runs and how to turn it on.

      That was my hobby's that I enjoy doing playing and learning about. Thank you for reading my blog today! :)